Monday, December 3, 2012

Predicting Piece


 Author's Note: This Piece is a predicting piece on the book “War Comes to Willy Freeman” written by James and Christopher Collier. I was looking to have good punctuation and good transitions.
 
  In the first part of the book  written by “ James and Christopher Collier” Willy has been going through many struggles with the revolutionary war happening just a few miles from her house. To make matters worse her father joined forces with the Americans to try to defeat the powerful British. Leaving Willy and her Mother at home with no protection  and British enemies passing by, heading to for Fort Griswold where Willy’s father is based.

As the story goes on I could almost assure that Willy will go through struggles throughout the book. You probably will wonder why, well who didn’t struggle through this horrific time? Everyone did the death toll towards the end over the war was in the twenty-five thousands.  I also feel that Willy will embark on many different adventure to find safety and help. Living on your own is never easy especially during the war period. When the war is over and the smoke clears out there has to be a light at the end of the tunnel her life has been so hard and I feel at the end of the story shell get a break and live a great peaceful life.

1 comment:

  1. CAN YOU ACTUALLY CREATE AN ENDING USING DIALOG AND EVENTS RELATED TO THE STORY?

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